and you flinch
whilst I preach
5 Apr 07
Rated 7.5 (8.3) by 2 users.
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for some reason I like this despite the sadness. nice write.
It was very intrusting but sad. i enjoyed, keep up the good work.
Thank you changeling and superquestio very much
I like this one much better than your slumber and big man poems.
Thanks for the read,
This one speaks to me of one life stifled and repressed by another and the diminishing effects of that on a relationship. Of course i could be completely wrong, I usually am.
Larry dunce poet Lark
nice pome, stout.
why is it not about beer?
good question Varun, would have made this a much better poem.
let's go drinking. i've got my soda-glasses on, where's my guiness?
i'd put 8/9 in one line. and also might get rid of that 'and'.
Varun - 8/9 in one line now
left the 'and' in
yes let's have a drink.
Happy new year stout.
Hey, Fuck face.
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