Is this written in the style of gnormal? I heard of snow rising in a Charlie Brown Peanuts cartoon strip...or cartoon movie or something. Charlie Brown definitely said that snow rises. Okay poem...not much content however. 6/10 — Henry
ah, both snow koans are tasty: gnormal's and Chuckles' and sadly, they are underrated. I will rise to the bait and rate because I can. And because my heart is fractured and undertows are strong. — banditfemme
thanks for the link. i did do a search on the poem list for "koan", and received only mine and another that had the word koan in the poem, before i posted.