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'sno koan
chuckles

WATER RISES
 1
BIRTHING CLOUDS.
 2
DOES NOT SNOW
 3
ALSO RISE?
 4

11 Apr 07

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mu

I love koan

snow, ice cream or otherwise

the Upper Case fingerwork perplexes as a true koan should
 — banditfemme

see also http://poetry.tetto.org /read/882/
 — unknown

Is this written in the style of gnormal? I heard of snow rising in a Charlie Brown Peanuts cartoon strip...or cartoon movie or something. Charlie Brown definitely said that snow rises. Okay poem...not much content however. 6/10
 — Henry

ah, both snow koans are tasty: gnormal's and Chuckles' and sadly, they are underrated. I will rise to the bait and rate because I can. And because my heart is fractured and undertows are strong.
 — banditfemme

revised.

thanks for the link. i did do a search on the poem list for "koan", and received only mine and another that had the word koan in the poem, before i posted.

please forgive...
 — chuckles

that search was on just "koan".
snow koan search brings up a 10 page result...
i didn't try snowkoan.
 — chuckles

it's no koan?

this does raise a
question to the clouds:

where is chuckle[_]s?

: )
 — fractalcore

clever.

in the way that it spells out the ways that i am not, so thus is justified because i am feeling inadequate. aquaduct.
 — DeformedLion

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