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mind rave
fishykarma

drugged up and let down,
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again...
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what a surprise.
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Popping way too much
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X
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and lying
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v   e   r  y    s   t  i   l   l on my back,
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staring at the ceiling,
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having my own personal rave...
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i am melting from the inside out
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liquid violence
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drips
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slowly
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from
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my
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ears
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in time to
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non-music...
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keep the beat kEeP tHe BeAt k e e p t h e b e a t
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...i hope it wont stain the carpet.
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27 Apr 07

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