| Caution: the inevitable pull of cliche
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| Come darling, let us throw | 1 |
caution to the wind | 2 |
and run, run away from | 3 |
here. Leave those petty | 4 |
words hanging in the air | 5 |
and your suit jacket on | 6 |
the chair. Ignore all politicians | 7 |
and silly wars, turn our | 8 |
heads away from broken | 9 |
laws.Neglect all rules of | 10 |
our roles, add disloyalty to | 11 |
all protocols.Wed all benefits | 12 |
to all risks, divorce all | 13 |
well-respected habits. | 14 |
Forward all obligations | 15 |
to eternity, fake a | 16 |
well-behaved obituary. | 17 |
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Come let us pour wine | 18 |
until overflow and sleep all | 19 |
day in each other's clothes. | 20 |
Feast until we distort our belts, | 21 |
sing and shout until hoarse | 22 |
throats. Kiss without a | 23 |
conditional care, remind all | 24 |
gods we don't care. Make | 25 |
love until we fall on the floor | 26 |
and then make more love | 27 |
until we're sore. | 28 |
Come my darling | 29 |
let us throw caution | 30 |
to the wind, | 31 |
to disintegrate | 32 |
into our | 33 |
dreams. | 34 |
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No matter the maturity, we all yearn for fantasy.
http://wakeewookoo.blogspot.com
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3 May 07 |
(define the words in this poem)
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pulled me right in. yuk.
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o LOve The REWRITE.!!!! v v GOOD JOB.
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thanks
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no cross-dressing implied unless that's ya dream.
— unknown
alluring cliché
if only all clichés could
be this tasty
— banditfemme
thank you.
— unknown
very nice poem.
mr. wakeewookoo.
— unknown
hmm
cool title
poor construction
some good wordlygroupings
you've begun and ended with
throw caution to the wind???
not sure how to regard this...
— chuckles
i dont really understand why repetition is bothering you chuck?
— unknown
maybe i am bothered by throw?
i'm not sure either.
— chuckles
i yearn for reality - just saying.
— unknown
am warming to it.
you want an R
L43?
snore is a tad goofy for the wispwispiness here
i don't like your line breaking it's ugliness in my eye
you can still hide your rhyme with longer lines
isn't that what you are really doing?
my regards are becoming less murky
i think i might like your poem...
— chuckles
i agree with snore. whore is a possibility. i was going for the comforting hibernating non etiquette aspects of snore.
— unknown
yearn for reality?
well i hope ya living in a pleasant fantasy.
— unknown
if you can call fantasies fulfilling all your desires satisfying. sometimes i would like feel rather than sense. what i mean is, do want to meet up for a fuck?
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fuq chuq
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nice changes
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thank you
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corny crap
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thanks?
— unknown
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