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succumbing to hate
wanderlusted

what is it, about hatred, that's so tempting?
 1
as inviting as the red apple (i.e. symbolic sin that surpasses time and meaning)
 2
a moment so absolutely wonderful that it
 3
drips sour, revolting madness (fyi-it's an acquired taste)
 4
and the greatest thing is that you do it and you don't even know
 5
if you were told, you'd laugh it off. shrug,
 6
who cares? you think. not me, and that's the only person that matters.
 7

4 Jul 07


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I like the beginning. I dont really understand line 3 and 4. It sounds like prose.
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