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Summer evening American Haikus
MattPat

Throwing a q-tip--
 1
Unsure in mid-air--  
 2
It lands in almost-out.
 3
 
 
Sitting on my chair
 4
Nude as a bird or baby:
 5
Flighty carelessness.
 6
 
 
Jacked off thrice today—
 7
Felt like more—
 8
I wanted more still.
 9
 
 
My hair’s falling out;
 10
I glance at every strand--
 11
Slowly obsessing.
 12
 
 
That itch on my scalp--
 13
Goddamn hair treatment.
 14
 
 
The birds’ wake, chirping,
 15
And are interrupted
 16
By early engines.
 17
 
 
Them early engines roar
 18
A while, but summer birds
 19
Are more persistent.
 20
 
 
Typing up a poem--
 21
The calm summer morning
 22
Fades focus in and out.  
 23
 
 
A sudden sound outside:
 24
Was that a seagull
 25
In little Westminster?
 26

27 Jul 07


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