T E I Y S
H R S
… E O
A E you
H E G T
R G I G N I H
1 Aug 07
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ignore the period above the T in "there" - i had to put it there for compositional purposes
very nice job with the fish.
This might read better if I was stoned out of my mind. LOL. I like the whole chain effect you got goin' on here, but I don't like the way you have to work to get the message, which is also unclear. "There is always something bigger than you?" I'm trying to find the metaphor/meaning in this. It's also not very kind on the eyes. A little too E.E. Cummings, perhaps? Maybe after I smoke a blueberry blunt to my face it'll read better.
I love it! I had to read the other comments in order to see the whole fish thing. I came back, favorited it and rated it a "10" now that I know wuzzup. Very creative and original.
thank you for your comments
thats pretty cool
a microcosm for the universe perhaps...or life/death itself.
Man it is the truth though.
Bloody marvellous! Amazing! Wunderbar! unk :))))
Very clever, interesting and fun. Visually, it is somewhat difficult to read. But this isn't a poem. It is very cool, but not a poem.
rockin poem! i do not understand how this is not poetry, cause i have seen some pretty weird shit that people think is poetry. you are a clever little bastard.
hahahaha i loved this
this is simply wonderful
to eliminate the necessity of using the period to gain the initial spacing:
use the italics tag ( without the underscores) then just use the space bar to add as much space as you like, then close the tag ( without the underscores)
nope, it didnt show up. the tag, on this site, is
left arrow (shift comma)
right arrow (shift period)
and then the same except add / before the i to close the tag
Why is this in top rated?
Obvious once I read it, the whole shark thing is "clever". I remember having a project to make something out of words like this, in the eight grade. Takes me back to that day in class. We used yellow paper that day...
sounds like eyesaque was a lil jealous; anywho thanks for my fifteen mins woooooooooooooooooooooooo
This is very clever! Love it!
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There is always something bigger than you.
I like this, because you don't have to follow the lines. When I first looked at it I could instantly see the poem. Nice. Very clever.