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confusion, and notes thereof
Virgil

the lean-to eggshell walls
 1
gilded with acapulco gold
 2
keep laughing at me,
 3
 
 
for every time I stepped
 4
out of bed
 5
I was knocked back down
 6
 
 
over-ripe figs baking
 7
on the pavement
 8
were no more useful,
 9
being broken by the window
 10
I watched them through
 11
 
 
it's how I imagine
 12
an unfilled frame
 13
whispering to groaning
 14
vanilla floor-boreds
 15
about ontological conditions:
 16
 
 
all of it
 17
knocking me back down,
 18
 
 
my flustered bed
 19
never shutting up
 20

11 Aug 07

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