|My Aether Oar
My subconscious is trying.
To contact me, oar
God is talking to me?
through my poems.
31 Dec 03
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a clever play on words. ok.
haha... i like.
I really like it a lot. You are so good at this, gnormal.
Not a haiku, but constructed with the same care and with the same level of difficulty. Well done.
This is so darned good. You are the master at this sort of poetry. You are so unique.
Fantastic. Love it. Love the way it reads completely differently without the punctuation. Give me 50 years and I may come up with something like this.
It's really nicely structured, but I think it could be better if you removed the capitalization/punctuation. Maybe also if you reversed the word order of "God is."
yep, it is.
Yes, very cool. You shine like a torch in a dark cave full of diamonds and sponge-cake.
Imperfect but pleasant.
i'd say it's all intentional -- the punctuation, italization,
capitalization. the quirkiness, albeit sending a gnormal message
on another plane, doesn't really interfere with the supposed
with the title in perspective, this is like killing 3 birds with one stone.