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visiting nothingness
bear

i'm off, i'm off!
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farewell my friends,
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i am taking a
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trip out of my mind
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and i do not know
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when i shall be back
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there is no time
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and no setting
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in this place
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so it's hard to say
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the hour of my return
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so say a prayer
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for me and for
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my epic journey
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so i may return safe
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from this unknown place
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and tell the world
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what i have seen
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in the form of writing
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1 Nov 07


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this would make an amusing away message on AIM. it's cute.
 — unknown

In all fairness, would nothing be all that epic? also, why pray? if you've accepted a void, you are prayer and it would be redundant to pray for you. Furthermore, writing isn't the only way to communicate this incommunicable idea, so I don't really understand that conclusion.
 — Notecompsure

imagination... duh.
 — bear

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