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last slow swallow on a steam pipe
stout

1 birds
 1
 
 
crab cakes
 2
soft aches
 3
must slide
 4
every man's
 5
bride
 6
 
 
2 projections
 7
 
 
crab salad
 8
bread crumb
 9
hot stew
 10
steel drum
 11

5 Nov 07

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nice pipe
 — kong

Reminds me of what I just swept off the floor
 — poetbill

i see you have not been taking your meds
or you just had crab salad last night,
did you throw it up?
 — unknown

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fish
 — unknown

cray
fish
?
 — stout

na just fish
 — unknown

nice poem.
 — hank

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