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always thirsty - a confession
stout

i shall
 1
hang you on
 2
a cold
 3
rope
 4
 
 
yearn for
 5
lean
 6
meat
 7
 
 
and speak with
 8
foaming mouth
 9
 
 
i am a
 10
fool and
 11
of pain
 12
i know
 13
nothing
 14

22 Nov 07


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nice poem.
 — hank

nice hank

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 — unknown

i like your style and the things you convey in your poems are real and relatable for me
that being said
i might suggest that there is a bit of impact that could be added were 10-14 separated somehow
nice words
 — kong

thanks. will think about separation for impact kong
 — stout

if it's true that you are a fool, of pain you will learn much. it is a pleasure introducing myself to your poems. thank you for having them here.
 — banditfemme

thanks banditfemme
 — stout

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