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NOWHERE IS THE TITLE:

TheNinety Syllables	1
OnA Tripod At Night	2


Footing the entirety	3
With eyes taking notice	4
Of the feat taking place...	5

Light maybe not in place	6
But the eyes could preface,	7
"We're millions on sentry."	8

So footing goes round and	9
Never misses a bend	10
And thus becomes the trend.	11

Confident tripod he –	12
Made wise by drinking the	13
Sis-six-sixth cup of tea.	14

written 11/25/07
http://poetrycritical.net/read/44569/

thanks, gnormal.

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fractalcore
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6 Dec 07

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favourite.
— raskolniikov

thanks
— fractalcore

wow i jus rlly do not understand what people see in this shit
— unknown

thanks again, raskolniikov.
and to you, too, unknown.
— fractalcore

interesting words and ideas play, observable reality in disguise
— nisetru

thanks, nisetru.
the reader can, of course,
view it from different angles.
what reality do you make of it?
— fractalcore

and, oh, is there a way we can
write titles in two or more lines here?
— fractalcore

i read it as a surreal poem about our reality. plus it is about someone special, even if Light maybe not in place.
i don't think the site allows two or more line titles...
— nisetru

well it's supposed to be a 3-line title and
yes, you can call that person special.
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— fractalcore

just revisiting the link.
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— fractalcore

no:where we go again -- without a doubt about the light and the teasan -- here you show your roots of wordplay in words that tantalize the tongue into wonders to come --
— AlchemiA

thanks for the visit, Alc.
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— fractalcore

thought i just heard a screaming faggot.

just kidding. i love the gesture, unk.
thunks.
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— fractalcore

happy pc anniversary to you, too,
piece #2.

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— fractalcore

i love your writing style.
Your poems are great.
— faith

thanks, faith.

it's easy to be inspired when you
have these really good poets around.

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— fractalcore

bumpeetee day, everee-one.
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— fractalcore

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