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NOWHERE IS THE TITLE:
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TheNinety Syllables
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OnA Tripod At Night
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Footing the entirety
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With eyes taking notice
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Of the feat taking place...
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Light maybe not in place
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But the eyes could preface,
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"We're millions on sentry."
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So footing goes round and
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Never misses a bend
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And thus becomes the trend.
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Confident tripod he –
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Made wise by drinking the
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Sis-six-sixth cup of tea.
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written 11/25/07
http://poetrycritical.net/read/44569/


thanks, gnormal.


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6 Dec 07

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favourite.
 — raskolniikov

thanks
 — fractalcore

wow i jus rlly do not understand what people see in this shit
 — unknown

thanks again, raskolniikov.
and to you, too, unknown.
 — fractalcore

interesting words and ideas play, observable reality in disguise
 — nisetru

thanks, nisetru.
the reader can, of course,
view it from different angles.
what reality do you make of it?
 — fractalcore

and, oh, is there a way we can
write titles in two or more lines here?
 — fractalcore

i read it as a surreal poem about our reality. plus it is about someone special, even if Light maybe not in place.
i don't think the site allows two or more line titles...
 — nisetru

well it's supposed to be a 3-line title and
yes, you can call that person special.
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 — fractalcore

just revisiting the link.
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 — fractalcore

no:where we go again -- without a doubt about the light and the teasan -- here you show your roots of wordplay in words that tantalize the tongue into wonders to come --
 — AlchemiA

thanks for the visit, Alc.
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 — fractalcore

thought i just heard a screaming faggot.

just kidding. i love the gesture, unk.
thunks.
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 — fractalcore

happy pc anniversary to you, too,
piece #2.

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 — fractalcore

i love your writing style.
Your poems are great.
 — faith

thanks, faith.

it's easy to be inspired when you
have these really good poets around.

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 — fractalcore

bumpeetee day, everee-one.
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 — fractalcore

almost 3 years...

i remember reading through your works
for 12 hours or so, dude.

cheers!
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 — fractalcore

congrats you learned how to use an underline...NEXT!
 — unknown

it actually took me forever to figure that out.
next...

; )
 — fractalcore

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