Can-on-drums, of this
Of that and whatnot...
I'd better now choke.
Just dig me a hole
Where I'll gladly stink;
Presents, pasths, fut-yours:
Can-naught pay the price
If you won't let me;
Hear the crow cant, "SHE..."
aka CAN'T SHE?
for Diana Jiganie
13 Dec 07
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wo. veree innovative. nice word creations. great humor.
"cannot pay the..." is like where you get to the part where you really, really, want to write one of those lamer poems, but are too embarrassed?
chuckle_s: 123 321 444 555 666
listen: thank you.
joey: thank you, too.
Ugh, looks like it was written in 30 seconds not to mention it doesn't rhyme. Let me know when actually take poetry seriously then I'll consider re-reading it.
thank you for reading, MrTom (and everyone else).
i got a few more lame poems to post
i take it as a sort of telling god or life or destiny or the wind or no one at all that fuss and rules are useless and get you tired.
i think you want something rare :) to be able to live, the way you want
is it so?
you are very keen, nisetru.
you hit one side of the coin
thanks for taking the time.
I am O-neg.
I like your different kinda style, fract.
you are interesting.
very kind of you, jen.
my selective memory tells me
i gotta have my finger pricked
again to really make sure i'm
pain is a beautiful thing.
thanks for dropping by, Joel.
How ignorant am I to not glance at your library of poems until now.
I love your style.
If I ever become a raging homosexual,
slight revision of |8.
huh? i'm good, man.
but no thanks,
er thanks nonetheless.
and there are other more lofty pieces in
the roster if you care to read them, hehe.
just revisiting the link.
Oh Negative while I`m Be Positive -- this gathers us to your stylistic word play and fractured mirrored gleanings inwordly meaning -- poke(d) is the power of now here no:where
got that right, AlchemiA.
thanks for stopping by.
I like how there is more to your poetry than the words.
thank you so much, technomancer.
i be negative too, and maybe there's some blood-affinity to this poem i should be feeling but i must have had a complete transfusion into type baba-dabba-doo, cause i'm not feeling this as poem out of poetry. nice word-wrap though, like singing.
ob-seen it once,
looked back twice,
shaded by the t[h]ree,
and went on fo[u]rever.
this is actually a fully-loaded piece
that i didn't mean to appear obvious --
or obscene as chuck may have noticed.
i was emotional when i wrote this and i
want it to stay cryptic and personal.
thanks for canting it.
aww I love this one "this and that" I also use this. I love this and that....
how long did you write this?
hi again, ivana.
well, it took me along while
to write but if you meant
"when" i wrote it, it was
more than a year ago.
"this and that", yes.
dedication's almost 3 years overdue.
you were there when i wrote this, nisetru.