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fractalcore
| Can-on-drums, of this | 1 |
Of that and whatnot... | 2 |
I'd better now choke. | 3 |
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Just dig me a hole | 4 |
Where I'll gladly stink; | 5 |
Presents, pasths, fut-yours: | 6 |
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Poke(d). | 7 |
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Can-naught pay the price | 8 |
If you won't let me; | 9 |
Hear the crow cant, "SHE..." | 10 |
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aka CAN'T SHE?
written 11/26/07
http://poetrycritical.net/read/36890/
thanks, gnormal.
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— chuckle_s
wo. veree innovative. nice word creations. great humor.
— listen
"cannot pay the..." is like where you get to the part where you really, really, want to write one of those lamer poems, but are too embarrassed?
— joey
chuckle_s: 123 321 444 555 666
listen: thank you.
joey: thank you, too.
— fractalcore
Ugh, looks like it was written in 30 seconds not to mention it doesn't rhyme. Let me know when actually take poetry seriously then I'll consider re-reading it.
— MrTom
thank you for reading, MrTom (and everyone else).
i got a few more lame poems to post
soon.
till then,
— fractalcore
i take it as a sort of telling god or life or destiny or the wind or no one at all that fuss and rules are useless and get you tired.
i think you want something rare :) to be able to live, the way you want
is it so?
— nisetru
you are very keen, nisetru.
you hit one side of the coin
just right.
thanks for taking the time.
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— fractalcore
I am O-neg.
I like your different kinda style, fract.
yes indeed,
you are interesting.
— jenakajoffer
very kind of you, jen.
my selective memory tells me
i gotta have my finger pricked
again to really make sure i'm
O-negative.
pain is a beautiful thing.
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— fractalcore
very whimsical...
— JoelJosol
thanks for dropping by, Joel.
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— fractalcore
How ignorant am I to not glance at your library of poems until now.
I love your style.
If I ever become a raging homosexual,
marry me.
— EpicPants
slight revision of |8.
huh? i'm good, man.
but no thanks,
er thanks nonetheless.
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— fractalcore
and there are other more lofty pieces in
the roster if you care to read them, hehe.
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— fractalcore
just revisiting the link.
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— fractalcore
Oh Negative while I`m Be Positive -- this gathers us to your stylistic word play and fractured mirrored gleanings inwordly meaning -- poke(d) is the power of now here no:where
— AlchemiA
got that right, AlchemiA.
thanks for stopping by.
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— fractalcore
I like how there is more to your poetry than the words.
— technomancer
thank you so much, technomancer.
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— fractalcore
obscene
— chuckle_s
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