| wax dolls
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fractalcore
| in the attic: | 1 |
lunatics | 2 |
you and me. | 3 |
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i beg, | 4 |
you let go | 5 |
but only briefly | 6 |
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so i can close the hatch... | 7 |
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written 11/26/07
with and for nisetru.
thanks for the title.
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20 Dec 07 |
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thank you, unknown.
the redundancy you try to uphold
is quite doing its job.
sixes have that kind of charm but
not the 3rd time they appear as a
digit.
or maybe i'm contradicting myself.
merry christmas.
: )
— fractalcore
now don't drink the
six-six-sixth cup of my tea
here. shop's closed for
the holidays.
christmas a merry redundancy.
: )
— fractalcore
my second favorite poem of yours after 'i love you' :)
— nisetru
oh, you're very kind, nisetru.
thought it will gain another
one of those wretched sixes.
merry christmas.
— fractalcore
wax dolls;
I think of voodoo.
— jenakajoffer
voodoo dolls wallowing in voodoo soup?
hehe, could've been goo-goo dolls among
many other things.
thanks so much.
: )
— fractalcore
10.
— raskolniikov
thank you so much, rask.
: )
— fractalcore
oooooooo. nice
— themolly
thank you so much, themolly.
: )
— fractalcore
witty. the ending is very catchy. you use the sparing technique really well.
— listen
thanks so much, listen.
pleasure to have you here again.
oops, i see a 1 coming.
; )
— fractalcore
nice poem
— chuckle_s
thanks, chuckle_s.
welcome back.
: )
— fractalcore
this was good
— unknown
with a lot of help from her,
yes it was.
it still is.
; )
— fractalcore
hey where's nisetru?
— unknown
ey, she's around.
takes a peek every
once in awhile.
the title was her own idea.
; )
— fractalcore
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