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royal blue flight suit
rosemary

wait
 1
and i'll be in space
 2
 
 
and something will be
 3
in this space
 4
 
 
wait
 5

22 Dec 07

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not so bad topological musing and some dizziness cause i hit my head on the wait part.

thoughtful and crafty.
 — joey

Doesn't seem like a poem.
 — unknown

i'm still waiting
 — unknown

are you in space?
 — unknown

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