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8ball sunflower
fractalcore

"It is certain."
 1
 
 
A flower will
 2
sun
 3
my
 4
day-to-day.
 5
 
 
And so I will
 6
forever
 7
be
 8
a-smiling.
 9
 
 
"Don't ask again --
 10
It is the future told
 11
once
 12
and for all."
 13
 
 
I am certain.
 14




written 12/23/07
a day before i set out for a climb with some friends

29 Dec 07

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beautiful
 — nisetru

typo in l14 "certain".
 — xixtas

nisetru: thanks. you are very kind.

xixtas: thank you, too. i've corrected the typo.

: )
 — fractalcore

this is interesting, I liked it.
although 8ball made me think of something entirely
not this.
lol.
 — jenakajoffer

please do tell.

: )
 — fractalcore

I wouldn't want to jeopardize my wholesome image.
=-)
 — jenakajoffer

oh c'mon now.
please...
: )
 — fractalcore

what exactly does the 8 ball represent? is this alluding to drug use?
 — unknown

it's a toy that will tell you your future
(it will also make you feel euphoric,
given the right situation).
=-)

hi frac-attack
gimme a shout sometime.
=-)
 — jenakajoffer

ey, jenny!
you're rockn n rollin real good!

unknown, nope. no drugs nor booze
here. just pure clean fun.
: )
 — fractalcore

you know,
i think this was the first poem i read of yours.
i like it more now than i did then.
fave.
 — jenakajoffer

thanks, jen. you're getting better
everytime. thanls for your poetry.

i did some sort of a tribute to you
great poets of PC. hope you like it.
: )
 — fractalcore

just occurred to me:

written 12/23/07
a day before i set out for a climb with some friends.

what a great climb that was.

just reminiscing, sorry.
: )
 — fractalcore

this was the poem that introduced me to you,
it's good to come back to.  =-)

where did you climb?
 — unknown

somewhere east of the island on another island.
spent xmas day on the peak.
: )
 — fractalcore

see how it was
 — unknown

yeah, thanks for bringing this up.
i wrote this for nisetru before my climb
that year.

: )
 — fractalcore

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