|trans(E)missions from my tEnt
you don't cook dinner that much;
you don't eat much anyway.
did your monitor explode?
do you spite my Buddha-touch?
)))))))))) ideally, Life's greater
(((((((((( in a cave beside a kart –
)))))))))) a Ferrari – or a (d)hog
(((((((((( thus dubbed Golden Achiever.
i'm a goat that prefers grout
but today seems quite diff'rent;
steamed grass toys with my palette,
i chew more and chicken out.
\\\\\\\\\\ so you want a wooden house –
////////// don't worry, i'll build you one
\\\\\\\\\\ with a library or two
////////// and three others to espouse.
there's a dent on your Statue:
a lotus pond on Its nose;
my R/Cs don't have seatbelts
but i zoom in them to you...
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14 Jan 08
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very technical cause of the last stanza. which i love best. i also like expressions like, Golden Achiever, Buddha-touch, steamed grass toys with my palette, my R/C's don't have seatbelts but i zoom in them to you. and i like that it rhymes, a-d lines, read well.
hm i recognize the stuff it's made of.
it'd've been nice had you lined up the moguls
nisetru: you're very kind as usual. Golden Achiever -
rather than Golden Retriever - jives perfectly with
either a dog or a street hog (or a soulmate). just some
thoughts while playing with my radio-controlled karts
in neverland. i'm glad you can relate to this. you have
some R/C's as well?
are the thread
on my toys'
tires. but i know
what you mean.
thanks and i'll
catch you here.
that's a rare phenomenon.
thanks for stopping by.
dont' need that apostrophe for the cars on l23.
very nice work.
ok, i ditched the apostrophe.
fractalcore: i have R/Cs and also navigation instruments receivers and antennae
i can't zoom but i can set the right coordinates and see you any moment..
very imaginative, your two lines,
'my R/Cs don't have seatbelts
but i zoom in them to you...'
hmm, very interesting. indeed...
what's your exact coordinates?
15 105; 17 745 khz; N 47.11499982620772°, E 21.9287109375° 34, 570454 meters east, 5218362 meters north (northern hemisphere)
are you sure you got the figures right?
I don't get it, but I don't get I am the walrus either, so I like it...quirky and odd
i don't get it myself.
thanks for dropping by, themolly.
this came up random and sent me wheeling when I read the second stroph I laughed at the 'insight' -- love it
lovely read, almost a year after its birth:)
thanks for your visit, nisetru.
i liked writing this piece and i still
like it to this day.
hope to see more of you around here.
bumpeetee day, everee-one.
good ol' days...