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Rainbow
afterbirth

I finally saw...
 1
 
 
   seasons in the leaves
 2
   beauty in the songbird
 3
   fertility in the soil
 4
   imagination in the clouds
 5
   mystery in the stars
 6
   peace in the night
 7
   power in the sea
 8
   comfort in the wine
 9
   promise in the sunset
 10
   need in your eyes
 11
 
 
I finally saw the colors
 12

14 Jan 08

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nice finish
 — unknown

thanks
 — afterbirth

i would take out "I finally saw" in the last line, so that the whole thing would be one thought. Does that make sense?

Loves it
 — tiedtoes

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