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Spring Sh wers
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.                 o
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b l   s s   m
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               o
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        o
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in
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s n   w    m  t i   n
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         o
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                          o          
 8
                    o
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21 Jan 08

Rated 10 (7) by 1 users.
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nice.
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 — fractalcore

Simple and effective. I like very much how the o's look like rain showering down the page. Not sure about the connection between the shower and the snow though. I give it an 8 anyway.
 — nakedowl

Sorry, it just took me a minute. Usually I think of april showers as rain but snow showers are perfectly acceptable in April depending upon where you live. Thanks to global warming I haven't seen that for several years though.
 — nakedowl

Ta, fcore. & thks too, nake, but this is meant to be about blossom falling / looking like...   :)
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