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ghost-lining my way from you.

we all live forever
via memory
and imprints
of eternal energy
i am a ghost of what was
he is a ghost of what will be
you are just a ghost that haunts me.
may your soul
be put to rest;
i'm deathly afraid
of dead things.

22 Jan 08

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 — Aziel

Holy shit, critique please? ):!
 — Aziel

ghost-lining gives me an image of -- ah i dont remember, some movie -- oh, ghost- . . . "Static?"
"White Noise"
that movie.
thats what ghost-lining remembers me.
 — OKcomputer

Ghost-lining is actually a tattoo term, but yeah, this isn't about tattooing. ):
 — Aziel

i don't want my soul to rest. but i think it is good that you don't want to have sex with them.

poem is kinda transparent and one-size-fits all, which i have never trusted.
 — DeformedLion

Like this a lot
 — themolly

There's more than one way to skin a cat.  Maybe even more than two if it's a lion.
 — Aziel