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ghost-lining my way from you.
Aziel

we all live forever
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via memory
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and imprints
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of eternal energy
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i am a ghost of what was
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he is a ghost of what will be
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you are just a ghost that haunts me.
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may your soul
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be put to rest;
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i'm deathly afraid
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of dead things.
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22 Jan 08

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buuuuuuuuump.
 — Aziel

Holy shit, critique please? ):!
 — Aziel

ghost-lining gives me an image of -- ah i dont remember, some movie -- oh, ghost- . . . "Static?"
"White Noise"
that movie.
thats what ghost-lining remembers me.
 — OKcomputer

Ghost-lining is actually a tattoo term, but yeah, this isn't about tattooing. ):
 — Aziel

i don't want my soul to rest. but i think it is good that you don't want to have sex with them.

poem is kinda transparent and one-size-fits all, which i have never trusted.
 — DeformedLion

Like this a lot
 — themolly

There's more than one way to skin a cat.  Maybe even more than two if it's a lion.
 — Aziel

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