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salt
vein

just in time
 1
   for shadow play
 2
palm-fingers
 3
  on my hands
 4
the ocean
 5
  a seductive
 6
conversation
 7
   tempting
 8
but not tangible
 9

3 Feb 08

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not tangible = intangible
 — unknown

nice
 — nisetru

hmm...nice indeed.
: )
 — fractalcore

thanks n I like the sound of not tangible a lot better than intangible :) but thanks for pointing it out.
 — vein

how about you try 'never' tangible?

nice poem.
 — unknown

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