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the safety of repetition
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i am currently on vacation until feb 24th.
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i am currently on vacation until feb 24th.
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i am currently on vacation until feb 24th.
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i am currently on vacation until feb 24th.
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it's like he never really left us. and every now and again i'll email him just to reassure myself.
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13 Feb 08

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you are the one responsible for your heer, mein herr. hardly a day goes past.
 — joey

stalker.
 — unknown

Sad and effective - the last line reads a bit like a PostSecret.
 — smugzy

poignant
 — unknown

This is very powerful, expresses well the shock and disbelief.. and i know it's a poem.. but i just wonder what would happen when the email account expires and emails return unchecked.. and what about feb. 25th?
 — nisetru

clarity?
 — unknown

there's no year so it is kinda endless
 — unknown

NIU shootings?
 — unknown

realy sorry to hear about your friend.
death and absence are never easy to
deal with but...
: )
 — fractalcore

this is crap
 — unknown

so are you coming back on the 24th or the 25th this can sometimes be a point of confusion as a lot of people dont mean the same thing when they say what their vacation days are
 — chuckle_s

ha
 — unknown

i had the same thoughts and worries that nisetru so well expressed.
hold on there.
 — photobooth

?
 — unknown

how sad
 — unknown

lol.
 — syrossoul

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