towards the Peak
of passion burning
the motor beneath
breathing the song
of our common
on this day
like no other
lifting me to
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ooh, i like this a lot. the words you use
are very familiar and fuel my passion
nice writing, happymole.
not to mention the love for the
special day, huh?
beautiful love hymn
The first ten lines really sing to me, a great jazz riff of thought.
unknown, flashing your member like this is more a myspace thing than here, cause we tend to look carefully, and i'm seeing that your organ is sort of an exclamation point and sort of existing without a body -- as though it was a nasty drawing on a toilet wall.
thank you all for commenting on and liking this.
I agree with fractralcore! Very beautiful and heartfelt.
hmmm, tutu-gather is a by-gone
word in the by-gone world.
isn't it weird?
This is a beaut~
Why should supposedly "great things" end this (or that) way? Any answer for this?
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