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daniel's sanctuary
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danny - poker - king of porn
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often did a dirty deed
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drunk and coy and on his side
 3
left as soon as he arrived
 4
 
 
his loins upon an earwig
 5
his thoughts on being free
 6
then nearing the conclusion
 7
he clocked the tresspassee
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4 Mar 08

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I can make no sense of this.  Poor earwig, though!  
 — Isabelle5

porn meets Bozo the clown
 — afterbirth

utterly oblique and charming. your lexicon breathes rarefied air.
 — banditfemme

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