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daniel's sanctuary

danny - poker - king of porn
often did a dirty deed
drunk and coy and on his side
left as soon as he arrived
his loins upon an earwig
his thoughts on being free
then nearing the conclusion
he clocked the tresspassee

4 Mar 08

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I can make no sense of this.  Poor earwig, though!  
 — Isabelle5

porn meets Bozo the clown
 — afterbirth

utterly oblique and charming. your lexicon breathes rarefied air.
 — banditfemme