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SweetPain

music is everything sometimes
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you don't realize
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the poetry of flowetry
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a sweet singers timber
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stingy drums beat
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swift guitars chords
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somber bassists swing
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its listening to this ensemble
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knowing that
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they may not know you
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where you are
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what you are doing
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or how you are feeling but
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it feels just like they are there
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whispering or screaming your consciousness
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out loud in 4/4 time
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and you finally get it
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i am high again
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its good to be here
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sitting and watching life pass by
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to this haze of sounds
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drugs can't do
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what music can
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15 Mar 08

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