I would change title to "You Are, I Am" — poetbill
Agree with Poetbill. The title needs to match. — Isabelle5
i amme am i we
you are i am
let's ditch religion
and be ourselves.
: ) — fractalcore
Very humble and beautiful poem. Not sure if I agree about changing the title. Because I can see that in reading the rest of the poem "You're" and "I'm" flow better....which I think is probably more important than changing the title. It hooked me in to read the poem as it stands. — smugzy