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Thoughts
moah384

Silent thoughts race empty spaces
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of sleepless minds left wide awake
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by drumming heart beats and loud silence
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as others rest and dream of day.
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Angry thoughts turn violent minds
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that seek mindless action for calculated
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mistakes by friends and friendly foe alike.....
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Revenged by death if medieval times renew.
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Shameless thoughts awaken the lustful pillar
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deprived of blood turned frail bone,
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Unstimulated under sticky seas of acne
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it waits for blindness and the end of "age".
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Calculated thoughts move ambitious kids
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towards their fate predestined by genes
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and chosen by families inherited at birth ,
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(And the extra grand here and there).....
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Happy thoughts like sad thoughts
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make careful people have crazy thoughts
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which always lead to careless thoughts
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that bring about the end of thought....
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30 Mar 08

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i tawt i taw a putty tat

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