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empty and unnecessary
fishwife

it stormed today and
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i was afraid of the rain.
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counting prayer beads,
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i can feel you watch over me too.
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holy, almighty, unconditional love
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only does so much,
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but it helps when it comes from down here,
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as well as above.
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31 Mar 08

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they say Love is the Answer.

i say Love is the Reason.

well, Love is whatever
is there and isn't.
: )
 — fractalcore

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