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fucking useless
mould_jesus

i'll flip you sideways,
 1
 
 
tear you apart; bone to barrier.
 2
pleasantly peel your definition
 3
from disgrace; apathy to anger
 4
and a page away from sin.
 5
i wrote myself into withdrawal
 6
and burned myself into the mold so
 7
that i forever hold shape.
 8
 
 
never warp, never fall, never fault.
 9
only work. only work. only work.
 10
saving me is like recycling garbage.
 11

5 Apr 08

Rated 10 (9) by 1 users.
Active (1): 10
Inactive (3): 8, 9, 9

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lines 6,7 and 8 are priceless. stillneed to keepreading this, but i amattracted by the tone, and the delivery.
 — crimsonkiss

killin it', I really did l2-5 fuckin epic man.

As far as suggestions go; not sure you need 9-11. First read through I hit that 'wow this is good' moment at 8, the meaning had already been developed the last lines are excess baggage IMO.


But what do i know?

nice write.
 — TCooks

wow.
: )
 — fractalcore

where does fucking a man come into any of this?
 — mould_jesus

Wow. Walks between anger and lust.  
 — themolly

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