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Coitus Interruptus
jkhutchings

open for me
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as a flower
 2
the soft petals
 3
of your womanhood
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wide in the
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morning sun
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touch my stamen
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to your pistil
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intertwine these
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vines of passion
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in the fragrant
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musk of sin
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let us shake
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the dew from
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our leaves in
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blissful harmony
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and later close
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like new buds
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in the starlit night........
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suddenly awake
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I realise that
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I fall in love
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with every
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pretty face
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that smiles
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at me being
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the sad story
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I am......
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5 Apr 08

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Good ending. This is a tad lech, as some skeevy moment you accidentally noticed between your parents. Good in that creepy way.
 — unknown

beautiful writing.
: )
 — fractalcore

Yes, shapeshifter, I was reading the playboy in the bathroom. thanks for the comments.
 — jkhutchings

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