|Concerning a poem I wrote the other day (with added dash & sparkle)
I wrote a poem
the other day that
nisetru omitted to *ten*,
and fractalcore couldn't
even be bothered to
they're asking for *trouble*
if you ask me.
6 Apr 08
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why bother. i mean, really?
thank you, man.
are you like a priest in vegas?
nisetru is such a fine poet and
which poem of yours did we miss?\
this is too common-speak. it needs dash. needs some sparkly bits.
well, yeah, i have this penchant for faving.
are we the only faving freaks here? i'm sure
there are others, too.
perhaps "failed" might be smoother than "omitted.
what is "favouritise"? couldn't you just say favourite?
this is pretty cute though.
oh yes, very kool.
LOL--yes, definitely cute. I rather like 'favourtise' and always fond of a dash and sparkly bits. Well-played.
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