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Spermutation
JustineCH

A likely lady
 1
married
 2
a maybe man.
 3
Together they had
 4
a possibilibaby.
 5

6 Apr 08

Rated 9.5 (8.5) by 2 users.
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a 10-fave [that never was].
but now is.
: )
 — fractalcore

a classic...
 — poetbill

this is lovely; the brevity is eloquent.
 — banditfemme

possibilibaby, how ingenious.
cute poem.
=-)
 — jenakajoffer

Interesting pun, cute and slight.  
 — Isabelle5

I've tried very hard to disqualify 'possibilibaby' but in  my heart I have to let it go. Very clever stuff, especially the title.
 — unknown

wondrously true and a playful portmanteau too --
 — AlchemiA

LOL!!!
 — starr

this is simple and beautiful. good work
 — lostkid

thank you, thank you :-).

This was my first poem posted in almost a year. Didn't expect for uno momento it would receive such positive cheers!
 — JustineCH

wow, thats cute. like a baby
 — joshcoops

Great poem :] i<3it lol *adds poem to best poems notepad*

Btw joshcoons i rlly hope ur a Girl irl cause if a guy was talking lyk that IRL lol id feel majorly sorry for him, seeing other Try hard gangster's (rebels) go around smashing up Boiz who talk lyk dat lol
 — unknown

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