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this love and the Whos
shadowskiss

Remember when we would only watch movies baked because nothing is ever trippy enough
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Your mind was blown away by Horton, the Whos and the tiny Whoville fluff.
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You said to me "I think he's found all that's wrong with the world"
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I said "I think that maybe you've found it" as your soft words blurred.
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Remember how after, we kissed like warm magic while our spirits melted
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How we'd grasp at ticking time holding it more than we'd ever held it
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We'd lie and press joint to lips, watching the smoke swirl in the candles light.
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Rhyme silly rhymes before we ever started sleeping, though we never said goodnight.
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6 Apr 08

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wow, it means the film is truly magic, uplifting.
i sense a separation there, but it is very small; sleeping tight embraced is what is beautiful about lovers' sleeping.. even though goodnight opens the gates of their common dream.
 — nisetru

i have yet to see that movie.

very nice poem.
: )
 — fractalcore

This is sweet.
 — themolly

thanks to everyone. :)
 — shadowskiss

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