Why the comma after your, line 2 and after the, line 5? Not needed and it is distracting.
I can't find a relation to the title. I like the clouds doing ballet. — Isabelle5
Isabelle5, the reason why I placed a comma there is because I wanted a feel of suspension. The title is somewhat off, can't think of any. I chose arabesque instead of ballet because it is more specific and vivid. — ptriumvirate