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Matth Class.
MattPat

I have been a goner more than
 1
Likely.
 2
To love selflessly, please don't
 3
let me cry, force me.
 4
 
 
These classes are trivial, and the
 5
seasons changing makes my heart
 6
yearn for you.
 7
 
 
The time for dallying is over,
 8
but I'm still in the same place
 9
I've always been.
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14 Apr 08

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my heart always yearns for her.
 — raskolniikov

you'll have to see about a girl quick.

go get her.
: )
 — fractalcore

How about spell check?  goner, Math.  Don't need a comma before and in line 5 or after over in line 9.

Oh, you are stuck in the worst place.  We all move on sooner or later, the mystery is how to do it.
 — Isabelle5

i think, Matt {mis]spelled Matt[h] intentionally.
i'm not sure about gonner.
: )
 — fractalcore

Well, that would work if we knew his name were Matthew and not just Matt.  
 — Isabelle5

his name prolly is Matthew Gonner.
: )
 — fractalcore

Matthew P Holbert. It was matt H Class Lol.
 — MattPat

OK, Matthew P. Holbert.
i hate math 'coz it gets
into my nerves.

: )
 — fractalcore

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