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Matth Class.

I have been a goner more than
To love selflessly, please don't
let me cry, force me.
These classes are trivial, and the
seasons changing makes my heart
yearn for you.
The time for dallying is over,
but I'm still in the same place
I've always been.

14 Apr 08

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my heart always yearns for her.
 — raskolniikov

you'll have to see about a girl quick.

go get her.
: )
 — fractalcore

How about spell check?  goner, Math.  Don't need a comma before and in line 5 or after over in line 9.

Oh, you are stuck in the worst place.  We all move on sooner or later, the mystery is how to do it.
 — Isabelle5

i think, Matt {mis]spelled Matt[h] intentionally.
i'm not sure about gonner.
: )
 — fractalcore

Well, that would work if we knew his name were Matthew and not just Matt.  
 — Isabelle5

his name prolly is Matthew Gonner.
: )
 — fractalcore

Matthew P Holbert. It was matt H Class Lol.
 — MattPat

OK, Matthew P. Holbert.
i hate math 'coz it gets
into my nerves.

: )
 — fractalcore