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if i gave you this would you laugh...............
sir_I_clan

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15 Apr 08

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Ha ha
 — themolly

hahahah
 — CrudeEcstasy

i love this
 — jenakajoffer

Not a poem but definitely took some effort.  
 — Isabelle5

I especially like the first stanza and your reflection on the human condition. I would cut the "gloom" line in the third stanza, but other than that I like this.
 — IamDave

not only would i laugh, but i am laughing, in disguise of course, my love
 — unknown

hehe very nice but this is a poetry site, please post your art elswhere
 — unknown

I'm sorry, but this is a poetry site. I don't care if you use expletives in your poems. Just make sure it's a poem.
 — Alex1991

hehe
i had a stretch several months ago probably a couple three weeks when i was on a bit of a kick giving the finger whilst driving to random passing vehicles i found it sort of funny i wonder what those people thought when they saw that
wtf?! why did that guy just give me the finger?
 — chuckle_s

cool. butt ass-scent dot an inch too long?
duh longer duh butt-her, huh?
: )
 — fractalcore

I was walking through town on Tuesday
when a car with two girls drove past and shouted
" Get a car "
I thought of something witty to shout back but they had drove off.
 — sir_I_clan

________         &nb sp;          &n bsp;          & nbsp;                       ;          &nbs p;_________
\________\--------___       ___         ____----------/_________/
       \_______\----\\\\\\   //_ _ \\    //////-------/________/
            ; \______\----\\|| (( ~|~ )))  ||//------/________/
            ;       \_____\---\\ ((\ = / ))) //----/_____/
            ;          &nbs p; \____\--\_)))  \ _)))---/____/
            ;          &nbs p;        \__/   ;(((     (((_/
          shot me the bird|  -)))  -  )) I'm a birdy
 — unknown

________         &nb sp;          &n bsp;          & nbsp;                       ;  ;          &nbs p;_________
\________\--------___       &n bsp;   ___         ____----------/_________/
       \_______\----\\\\\\      //_ _ \\    //////-------/________/
            ; ; \______\----\\|| (( ~|~ )))  ||//------/________/
            ; ;       \_____\---\\ ((\ = / ))) //----/_____/
            ; ;         &nb sp;&nbs p; \____\--\_)))  \ _)))---/____/
            ; ;         &nb sp;&nbs p;        \__/   ; ;(((     (((_/
           shot me the bird|  -)))  -  )) I'm a birdy

— Very nice, Thank you.
 — sir_I_clan

your poems are good. great, actually, when you speak with your voice ('crawling again', 'bubbles'), don't get cute.
 — hank

Is this a group of skyscrapers tilted over so we can see the underside. A profound and visually stunning piece which expresses for me the thinking mans reaction to urban hell.
 — larrylark

.
 — unknown

it's a classic.

why wood dye
ditch it?

; )
 — fractalcore

fair point
 — unknown

i'd like it better as the leaning tower of pizza

yum

cept of course . . .then you'd have to use the entire arm (two arms + nook and cranny) . . .in keeping with geolinguistic integrity.
 — unknown

art.
 — PaleHorse

cute
 — unknown

Cool.  I might've added much more verbiage but it's still visually awesome.
 — JKWeb

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