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castles in the air
maila

If I were imagining another
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corner of this street,
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a footstep, a voice,
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shadows of death;
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if I were imagining
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stars falling on the ground
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in front of me, I'd pick one.
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I'd touch you.
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20 Apr 08

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Like it. Unusual in a nice way.
 — themolly

stars burn when they are touched.
 — raskolniikov

Thank you both for your kind words.
 — maila

nice, yeah pretty nice. makes me heart a flutter.

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 — DeformedLion

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