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Ode to Spring
JustineCH

The simplest promise
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of new-born hope
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breathes with soft delight,
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combining all floral colours
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to a dazzling white.
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21 Apr 08

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I do not like seasonally inspired poetry. It is overused and few can do it right.

Unless you are English don't put a "U" in colors.
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colours.
 — raskolniikov

us English will never submit to your crappy American spelling, NEVER!
colour, foetus, aluminium, favourite, centre, encylycopaedia
take that you bastards!
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Note the "Unless you are English" in the previous comment.
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Undress! You are English ...
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