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Aziel

oh you are so hot
 1
oh hot burning cooking oil
 2
fried doomy doomy
 3

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26 Apr 08

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oh, aromatic. Consider tossing the 2nd "oh" ( l 2) and the footer isn't as tasty as the body.
 — banditfemme

Oh, come on.  You know it's delicious.
 — Aziel

well..... I am prepared to be convinced if you promise it's not deep-fried
 — banditfemme

I only pan fry.  You're in luck.
 — Aziel

I thought so. You look like a healthy girl. Okay, I am convinced.
 — banditfemme

;D
 — Aziel

Cute!  :-)  And yes, banditfemme's right.  You've got an extra syllable in L2 with the 2nd "oh."  
 — starr

It's supposed to be a haiku.  5 7 5.
 — Aziel

5 - 7 - 5 syllables --
 — unknown

oh yeah?
oi-[h]ell yeah...
hmm...
: )
 — fractalcore

lulz
 — Cerulise

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