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Tears In The Sky
Mayuna

With A Heavy Heart
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And Tears In My Eyes
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I Look To The Sky
 3
And Whisper Good-Bye
 4

30 Apr 08

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so sad, like he was dying, or crying for someone loved and lost, or the final act after losing faith, or going to a travel that would lead him far from the sight of sky, or to a confinement.. so much in a little poem. i like the title.
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