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Don't Be Afraid
Mayuna

Don't be afraid when the wind blows
 1
It sweeps out the old
 2
Calming soothing the weary traveler
 3
As they reach the moutain top
 4
Gazing out across the distance
 5
At the landscape that lays before them
 6
The sun shines brightly
 7
Warming the shivering soul with in
 8
The wind blows again
 9
Ushering in change and the promise of a new life
 10

30 Apr 08


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nice parallel, acknowledging the changes that're brought by wind, and brought by those moments of feeling the slight unsteadiness in one's life, and l5-8 are beautiful
 — nisetru

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