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Don't Be Afraid

Don't be afraid when the wind blows
It sweeps out the old
Calming soothing the weary traveler
As they reach the moutain top
Gazing out across the distance
At the landscape that lays before them
The sun shines brightly
Warming the shivering soul with in
The wind blows again
Ushering in change and the promise of a new life

30 Apr 08

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nice parallel, acknowledging the changes that're brought by wind, and brought by those moments of feeling the slight unsteadiness in one's life, and l5-8 are beautiful
 — nisetru