|THE MECHANICS OF QUANTA aka THE FROG IN MY THROAT
| at the trough
| the crest
| buy the test,test,test
| f r e e !!!
| freed,damnedtofrolic = mc^2
| away : in
| turbo-lent I'm-ages...
| for the Om
| of long be-fore ––
| the Head, old
| the Wind
| fire it up
| on stone, thee
| of Light-kneeing
| pray, name your price
| do, say -- the Onely thing;
| eye: the [demi]Gawd steers
| multiple moons on
| his cohesive
| wingedbee water
| on a spring
soulmates do exist
i've found mine
Diana Jiganie w/ all my love
3 May 08
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we got frogs and toads at the speed of de-light here and your way-words wile us beguile and sus us inWORDs flow-er and hop-eh -- wondrous meta-write on joey's kelly fractalcore
thanks a lot, AlchemiA.
joey is an amazing guy.
how do you like the format?
finally ditched "demagogue".
Energy is a redundant thing.
yes, better than my kelly. this one is a poem. even the shape works, and i haven't seen working shape in about a hundred years. it's not that it does anything in my world, it's that you've written such a beautiful world world.
thanks for the inspiration.
for you...and there are two boys here.
wonderful reading, play of words and visual, i like it very much
and joey, here is where all the worlds spin at the
same axis; or at least two of them are twins.
sorry for the mess i left on your kelly's comment
the format is AWEsum
I wish I understood this, but it looks very intriguing to say the very least. I like some of the word playing, the arrow, the E = mc^2 imagery (dual phrase in this case, lol).
Is there a way I could ask you to explain?
AlchemiA, thank you, man.
thank you very much, Aziel.
sorry, i can't and won't explain this to
someday you'll know.
aweright, that's a lovely sicks.
care to explain?
or not, hehe.
i think all the lines up the left really solidify the shape so that it has an anchor for the eyeballzz
foe-tons -- yeah, not sure why that is. human nature?
thank you so much, chuckle_s.
did you notice the equal sign at the base of
the [thin] arrow and the infinity symbol at the base
of the poem? you can either go upwards on the
left side and let the symbol[s] bring your eyes
towards the moniker in blue; or upwards on the
right side by reading the poem backwards.
that is, of course, if reading in the conventional
way bores you.
human nature reverse-engineered, if you will.
very nifty! i wondered at the significance of the arrow. unfortunately, i don't rate, so in my present (logged-in) state i am disallowed from seeing the blue.
thinking of blue -- i strongly recommend you check out a gizmoid entitled "my index finger just" on this site, then follow it where it leads. incredible.
i meant the word-arrow, of course
can someone explain this? besides the author who 's resistance to this is pussyling?
i think i've seen that piece long before, chuckle_s.
by blu himself, right?
sorry unk, i didn't mean to be pussyling you or
anybody at all.
its a vorTEXT -- vortices are an interesting phenomenon in Nature -- all the little whirls and churls in a stream rushing to the Sea are little vortices cleaning the water right down to the atomic level -- the fish has this phenomenon mastered as he manages the whirls around him so that he can bullet up the falls -- vortices are apparently one way we can levitate and the UFO folks have utilized this technology apparently -- Any spiral motion with closed streamlines is vortex flow -- so the infinity sign at the bottom is TRUTH and BEAUTY in Nature --
your complement supplements and compliments, AlchemiA.
there's a more visual vortex in COME|STUNT CHANGE
if you'd like to check it out.
>aweright, that's a lovely sicks.
care to explain?
or not, hehe.
and now a dwarfen t[h]ree?
now you're becoming half-cocky,
don't you thUNK?
butt thUNKS just the same.
I love your fractal syntax. You are a unique snowflake. *
The visual presentation here is mesmorising. Good one!
btw, how do you get rid of scalp flakes
aside from taking a bath regularly?
Do you have "head and shoulders" over there...? I'd think one of those anti-dandruff shampoos would take care of it. Or cover your head in honey and sprinkle salt on it.
just all shoulders and no head.
i'm in pretty deep flaky shit, huh?
fractalcore - Drink lottsa water with -Hydrogen and imbued with many minerals -- not the chLoriHated type and sweat man sweat
i think i've finally figured out the answer:
take a bath regularly...as in "everyday"
should've been easy were it not for the
all shoulders and no head.
it's good but it's also bad
your yin-yang is good
but you'll have to defend your
i love the creativity here. word creations, excel. lent me a few laughs, and such.
but good humor. not overdone at all.
not overdone in any way, or shape, or the awesome form you chose.
thank you so much, listen.
glad to have you here.
a poem about light...photons.
light is a wave, trough and crest.
Gawd is light, as well as NOT
Great poem! :)
well, it's not so hard to spot, is it?
but did you meet gawd on your way out
or noticed how unsuspecting lovers and
friends get gossiped about in the diner?
thanks for your patronage, by the way.
your espresso's on the house.
and foes, too.
bumpeetee day, everee-one.
you clever wacky pack you.
now you're getting a lil too
excited there with your RUBBER,
i think you're looking for this one, mr JKWebster sir.
That's it! Love it...thanks.
you're kind as always.
thank you, sir.
Ok fine, like that is it fact.
ah yes the tornado poem!!
it's fine with me, ok?
it's a fact.
hi rubbee mander,
it's a twisted twister, hehe.
loved it!! thank you. very much.
thank you, unk.
Awesome work! I always love your word play
enticed with the tonality though was not convinced to read with the eyes but aloud. from then on mono-tones supplied thoughts of having to babble in a hammock - side by side or hand in hand. a struck!
so you have a periodic window in a stochastic system. not bad going o fractalated one. amazing how you do this kind of piece
cooooooooool! love it
author,your works are outlandish.
What you did there in the middle of this poem, was fucking creationalism .COOL like the helix-- can you make it a double?
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