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netskyIam

most
 1
fatal anniversaries
 2
pass
 3
by unnoticed
 4

5 May 08

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calendars always let you down.
 — joey

ow. true
 — themolly

HI NET!!!!!!!! Long time no read :(
 — themolly

moist
fetal deliveries
pass
naturally
 — unknown

nice rewrite there, unk.

very true piece up there.

what day is it today? and what time?
: )
 — fractalcore

Hello all. Thanks for the comments, wry and funny and deep.
The silly six words, my only grasp for "poetry" in months,
are really four words only!  Yes, the final two words are a pathetic siganture,
lol.  Must lol.  Thanks. Remember to never take life too seriously, or you end up a moping dope...like me.
 — netskyIam

*he still can't spell check*
(signature, signature, sigh)
 — netskyIam

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