| anti?freeze!!! my flathappeefeetulence
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fractalcore
| i think, you think, it stinks... | 1 |
[hold (that) thought] | 2 |
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reeks of passion | 3 |
pretty (you/i are/am) | 4 |
bad | 5 |
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[don't] | 6 |
let it out | 7 |
[yet] | 8 |
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written 4/02/08 and/or 4/06/08
thanks to
happymole for your username/poems
http://poetrycritical.net/read/47677/
http://poetrycritical.net/read/47931/
nisetru for your response/thoughts/poems
http://poetrycritical.net/forum/read/146407/
chuckle_s for your poem(s)
http://poetrycritical.net/read/47308/
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6 May 08 |
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Comments:
a love poem, i like it
— nisetru
thank you so much, nisetru.
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— fractalcore
LOL! This will forever be ringing in my head whilst in the elevator.
— grneyeddevil
welp,
keep away
from elevators
to be
safe.
unless,
of course,
you wanna play fire
with your
significant other
in there
with your
highly
flammable
love-gas.
: )
— fractalcore
so nobody else loves gas?
shucks!
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— fractalcore
hehe
no problem!
— chuckle_s
i wrote a little countrywestern sounding ditty for my girl that contains the phrase dutch-oven! i guess i'll have to sing it to her soon i've been putting it off
— chuckle_s
time is gold in the oven, chuckle_s.
thanks for stopping by.
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— fractalcore
very witty; creative with a good metaphor; told like an expert.
nice.
— listen
hi, listen.
i didn't expect much praise for this piece but thank
you for your kind words as always.
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— fractalcore
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