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They were little devils,
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flames that only cared about the next
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new way to destroy you.
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They were innovative, and they wanted
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a tall, overbearing way to
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overload you, crush you and your
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dreams, as though you were under a
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big pile of concrete and steel,
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when they took away your building of
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toughness; they wanted to coal lapse
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you, flood you with soot and the
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stuff they put in fire
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gratings. They tried to make people ash,
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those ash holes.
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And cars. That was how they destroyed a
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person once. Or, thought they did.
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The person lived, which flustered them.
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So they chose an attractive woman,
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assaulted her under asphalt;
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but she lived as well. So the little
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demons, they took some speed, and
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decided it was time to jerk more
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people around, to create their
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imp power;
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tripped, because it fired backwards.
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and there was nothing they could do.
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Fool lash little imps.
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8 May 08

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-- nice word play and Fire does not know where to stop -- the ultimate consumer -- in the Medicine Wheel, a Map merely, there are the Four Elements -- each Race empowered with the bane or boon of that urge -- White-Fire peoples with their Fire Wires and internal combustions are conflagrating upon the Earth with fissionable fusions -- the coffee culture and fire water drinkers -- consuming themselves with ambitious Fire movies and Stars falling burning themselves out after shining so brightly -- Earth-Red man waits and Black Waterman moves us soulfully there and Yellow Airman with bright intelligence aware -- a curious Map it is and we are each other in this -- imp power the fool ash we embrace the fallen tripped and backfired
 — AlchemiA

thanks AlchemiA. you really understand this piece, and i like that. i'm glad you got the message.

i assume these ways aren't yours, however. it seems we all need to struggle against those that employ this theme as their doctrine.

such a shame they do that ...

anyway, i appreciate your complement. it means a lot.
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awe-sum tote-tall-it-tee.

duh word ease hour playground.

lust lying's my fave-ore-eat.
: )
 — fractalcore

Fractalcore, thanks. i am glad you liked this.
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