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Everyones so scared now a days.
Qwicked

Everyones so scared now-a-days
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afraid the world will go up in a blaze
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authority figures sit pointing crooked fingers
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at all those so called sinners
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so intent on making money
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they have forgotten the world can be sunny
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activsts and protesters yell out their debates
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Only causing the world more drama and hate
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when will this maddness come to an end
 9
maybe when the poor have a say again
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but for now money will talk loud
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until the internet rips it all down
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and then when we are all equal
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with no plans to make a sequal
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much thanks we'll be able to give
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for when we are equal we can all just live.
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First attempt at a more socially on topic poem.

24 Jan 04


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the rhyme scheme is just bad
 — TaylorC

not exremely bad fair for a first attempt
 — dethmanic

i think its prety good
 — reet

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