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Save Me
Luxy

I’m so tired already but I’ve barely been alive,
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just twenty years, what about twenty more?
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No. I’ve been cripple  
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ever since I knew what God was.
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That’s why nobody danced with me.
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I tried calling for an ambulance once
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or a fire truck
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but they all hung up.
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I know the sirens won’t come for me,
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that’s what I want.
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25 May 08

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wow this is good. its rather simple but at the same time has depth
 — silentspring

i wish i knew how to save you. very well done you gave me chills.
 — brokenarrows

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