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Self Censorship
CrudeEcstasy

Bleed me
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of these corrections
 2
That only serve
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to silence me
 4
to keep me meek
 5
in the fear
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that you'll leave me.
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But I'm the one
 8
who's leaving
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And in a way
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I'm already gone
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Stuck in fear
 12
of the downfall
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Stuck in the
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mind gunk
 15
that limits my
 16
relation
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I know it's folly
 18
 
 
Even in the writing
 19
I think
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"Not true"
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but it comes up
 22
in hues
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And I'm guilty of
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indulging this weak
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27 May 08

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sink me, if i've said it wrong --
they only serve, who want
and wait. and mink and fur
of any kind deserve
to drape you,
date rape drama
that you're looking
for.

but i'm the mink
who's wiggling away,
into the trees -- "firs" --
oh, gawd, ironic!! let
me rodent your memory
with mind glue
and at least beer,
and maybe queer
myself to your leaving,
in tears of fear...

(more to come, if you'll come back )
 — joey

But I am back
Long before I left
and in creeping thighs
I move around you, deft.

Sharp, and sincere
longing for the tickle of a post embrace,
too much, too much,
kinda taste.

But don't offer me lingering fears
I'll stick around if the wine is good
fuzz up to your kindness like a deep wood.
Smell of earth and wet, temperate air.

Can we linger hear?
 — CrudeEcstasy

what an ex-change
and i've got bills to pay.

pome away, folks.
: )
 — fractalcore

herring lingers in the river,
dating herring,
come to molt -- milton
called it, o hao aar the my tee
fallen. still, and i remember,
stunk, in the gunk,
and waat fish
these morsals be.
 — joey

bee's kneads the lofty fallen
and soothing softly spoken fingers pardon
but lofty are the goals that may be changed

what cares air of the density of birds
or the flow of the seed?
 — CrudeEcstasy

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