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parity
unknown

for every thrust
 1
there was a groan
 2
and the false belief
 3
he was god and
 4
she a disciple of
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monotheism
 6

1 Jun 08

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Interesting...
 — addagirl

perfect.
: )
 — fractalcore

yes, paddling on the mississippi has always been an inspiration.
 — joey

Thanks
 — unknown

simple direct - painful... true..

not bad
 — Mongrol

A new way to put a tired message

Damn it! get some morals you damn kids!

8/10
 — technomancer

the libido is destructive transformative and ... i could go on
 — unknown

Wonderfully Juicy
 — unknown

ummm, that's an awful lot of false beliefs, wouldn't you say?
 — unknown

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